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He came back to an empty house, a house which looked complete only with the presence of his wife.
She had promised him that she would never leave him, never abandon him.
He lied down and closed his eyes to find some sleep; to find some peace.
They were together once again as she had promised.
He found her in his dreams; that night and every other night.
He came back to an empty house, a house which looked complete only with the presence of his wife.
She had promised him that she would never leave him, never abandon him.
He lied down and closed his eyes to find some sleep; to find some peace.
They were together once again as she had promised.
He found her in his dreams; that night and every other night.
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Dreams are beautiful, aren't they? They can make promises come true. Absolutely lovely.
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DeleteYou got the gist of the story perfectly!
Broken promises mended in dreams :) Thanks to dreams even the worst day holds a promise.
ReplyDeleteThanks Vidya!
Delete"Thanks to dreams even the worst day holds a promise."
Thats so true!
A dream world is full of solace when the real world falls apart. Nice take on abandon!!
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DeleteThanks to dreams, isn't it! Good one Vidya.
ReplyDeleteThanks Vinitha for dropping by!
DeleteLovely thoughts!
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DeleteA beautiful dream weaved with such passion, talent and labor of love:)
ReplyDeleteAh, the power of dreams. How they can calm us with their illusion.
ReplyDeleteThank you Shailaja for dropping by!
DeleteThe power of dreams! and as a reason, i never want to wake up shattering my dreams. Shikes, the alarm..it always haunts!
ReplyDeleteThanks Ajay for dropping by! We all hate those alarms, don't we :-)
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